高考英语作文评分标准及范文10篇,高考英语作文评分标准

书面表达题的考查要点及评分原则

准确使用语法、词汇、拼写和标点符号。运用一些句型、短语，把自己表达清楚，写一篇通顺易懂的短文。

从四个角度将评分分为5-6个等级，评分主要从以下几个方面考虑：

1)内容分。

2)使用的词汇和语法结构的数量。

3)词汇使用的准确性和句子结构的准确性。

4)语境的连贯性。

各等级的范围和标准(满分25分)

五档(非常好):(21-25分)

1.完成试题中指定的任务。

2.涵盖所有内容点。3.使用了更多的语法结构和词汇。

4.语法结构或词汇有一些错误，但都是因为试图使用更复杂的结构或更高级的词汇而造成的；有很强的语言能力。

5.句子之间的连接成分被有效地用来使整个文本紧凑。

6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。

第四档(好):(16-20分)

1.完成试题中指定的任务。

2.虽然省略了1、2个次要点，但涵盖了所有主要内容。

3.应用的语法结构和词汇能够满足任务的要求。

4.语法结构或词汇的应用基本准确，有些错误主要是尝试复杂的语法结构或词汇造成的。

5.在句子之间使用简单的连接元素，使整个文本紧凑。

6.达到了预期的写作目的。

第三档(适当):(11-15分)

1.基本完成了试题规定的任务。

2.虽然省略了一些内容，但涵盖了所有主要内容。

3.应用的语法结构和词汇能够满足任务的要求。

4.语法结构或词汇有一些错误，但不影响理解。

5.在句子之间使用简单的连接元素，使整个文本连贯。

6.总体来说，基本达到了预期的写作目的。

二档(差):(6-10分)

1.未能正确完成试题中规定的任务。

2.一些主要内容被省略或描述不清楚，写了一些无关的内容。

3.语法结构单调，词汇条目有限。

4.语法结构或词汇有一些错误，影响对写作内容的理解。

5.句子之间较少使用连接词，内容缺乏连贯性。

6.信息没有清楚地传达给读者。

一档(差):(1-5分)

1.未能完成试题中规定的任务。

2.明显遗漏主要内容，写一些无关的内容，可能是没有理解考试要求。

3.语法结构单调，词汇条目有限。

4.语法结构或词汇错误较多，影响对写作内容的理解。

5.句子之间缺乏连接成分，内容不连贯。

6.信息未能传达给读者。

F.没有分数：(0)

(一)

亲爱的先生：

我的名字叫李华。我写信是为了表达我对现代媒体对美国学生的影响的关注。

如今，iPads在我们学校非常流行。许多学生认为拥有一台iPad是一种时尚。毫无疑问，有了它我们可以听音乐，下载学习资料，等等。换句话说，它有助于我们的学习，尤其是我们的英语学习。

然而，每个硬币都有两面。有些同学把iPads带到教室听音乐，破坏了我们的学习氛围。更糟糕的是，有些人甚至把宝贵的时间浪费在玩游戏上。

在我看来，学校是一个我们应该把注意力集中在课程上的地方，所以iPads应该在课堂上被禁止。我希望你能考虑我的建议。

我期待着你的早日答复。

你的，

李华

(二)

嗨伙计们，

对你来说是个好消息！2015年5月4日将在我校报告厅举行卡拉ok晚会。由学生会组织的晚会

on of Xinhua Middle School will start at 7:00 pm and last for about two hours. Teachers and students who like English songs are all welcome to attend the party.

I’m willing to invite you to the party and expecting to sing an English song together with you. I hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient to you. Let’s enjoy ourselves. Please call 89346752 for further information.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

（三）

Senior middle school graduates students of our school have different opinions on how to choose their courses and universities.

About 35% of the students believe the choice should be based on their own interests. They say interest is the mother of success. It is a miserable thing to have to spend most of your time studying what you have no interest in.

Most of the students, however, insist that main consideration should be given to the needs of our society. They argue that not everyone can find the job they like best. Besides, interest is not something unchangeable. We can always develop it.

Interestingly, about 20% of the students find it difficult to make a choice and would rather depend on their parents or teachers to make a decision for them.

（四）

Dear friends,

In recent years, with the popularity of the Internet, many of us devote a great deal of time to it. As a consequence, we don’t write as well as we did in the past. In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting, we’d like to offer some suggestions:

To begin with, we are supposed to spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books. We’d better form the habit of keeping diaries every day to practice handwriting. Besides, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails. Beautiful handwriting is beneficial to us students. So please pay more attention to our handwriting.

Students’ Union

（五）

Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings

and opinions and even get help with their foreign language studies.

Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.

I hold the view that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can find it in our classmates and other people around us.

（六）

Guangming High School is in the west of the city. When you enter the school gate, you can find the teaching building on your left and the gymnasium on your right. Walking on further, you can see a round building which is the library in the middle of the campus. The building on the northwest corner serves as the dining hall and the building opposite it on the northeast corner is the students ‘dormitory.

The high school has a history of nearly 100 years. There are about 5000 students studying here and a teaching staff of about 300. The campus covers an area of 24000 square meters with bushes and flowers surrounding every building, which provides a quiet and beautiful environment for the students.

（七）

I am a Senior 3 student. I often quarrel with my parents over whether I can watch TV after school.

My parents hold the opinion that I should study hard so that I will have more choices in the future. Besides, they consider that it is harmful to my eyes to watch TV too often. But in my view, it is TV that gives me something that I am interested in. In addition, it may relax my mind when I am tired, in which case the efficiency of my study will be improved.

In the end we reached an agreement. Only at weekends am I allowed to watch TV, however, the programs are limited to news, sports and entertainment, not including TV plays. This agreement is acceptable to me for it is beneficial to my study and life.

（八）

Ladies and gentlemen, I feel it a great honor to have a chance to give a speech here, talking about fog and haze weather. Since the end of last year, fog and haze weather has occurred a lot in some areas of China, which has done great harm to our daily life. Many traffic accidents happened because of the bad weather. Besides, more and more citizens have to go to see the doctor because of the serious disease caused by the fog and haze.

We should take measures to reduce fog and haze weather. The government should suggest people go to work or school with the public transportation. Also more trees should be planted. As for me，I will go to school by bike or on foot.

Would you join us in protecting the environment?

Thank you.

（九）

Attention, please everyone! Welcome to this resort!

You are lucky enough to arrive here at the very season to visit the famous place of interest, for a great many flowers are in full bloom.

Before we climb up the mountain, I have something important to tell you. Firstly, you’re expected to stay with the group all the time and not fall far behind the others; otherwise, it will cause a lot of trouble. Secondly, while climbing up the mountain, mind your steps to avoid possible accidents along the narrow paths. Last but the most important, smoking is strictly forbidden in the area in case of forest fires.

I hope you’ll have a pleasant trip. Enjoy your time！

（十）

Dear Sir,

My name is Liu Yang, from Hope High School in Jinan. I’m glad to get the news that Hong Kong University will have independent recruitment in mainland, so I would like to apply for it.

I am eighteen, studying in Senior 3. I am sociable, easy-going and good at communicating with others. Besides, I am quite independent and it is easy for me to adapt to a new environment. As a senior student, I have been working hard at my lessons and managed to get high grades. All these will enable me to continue my study in your university. What’s more, my hobbies are playing basketball and football and I am also good at playing the violin.

Looking forward to your reply .

Yours sincerely,

Liu Yang